Hilarious. The framework of putting the reviewers in a ridiculous story was clever, and I found it funny, even as somebody who hasn't watched any of TGWTG's work. I really wish the animation was better, and I wish there was a notice at the beginning saying that the voices were cut from actual reviews (for those who don't know them), but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
That was pretty entertaining. Jokes were great. On the contrary, however, I have some criticisms.
1 - Audio needs to be...better. At some points, the background music is overpowering, and the vocals, although recorded pretty well overall, could be higher quality. However, the sound effects worked great, and the choice of background music was perfect.
2 - Lip syncing doesn't always match.
3 - Scene select?
1 - I can agree with this. I've figured out how to adjust sound levels now, so it should be fixed in the second episode.
2 - That was just due to laziness. Tee-hee.
3 - Added as per your request!
The ending was pathetic, and the blue background was far too bland, but the rest of this flash is fine.
My biggest flaw with this is that all you see are clocks playing the guitar. And the movement isn't even realistic. Vary the types of shots and movements and this would be much better.
You're an idiot.
The humor isn't really all that good and the looping is annoying. In addition, the end is a bit tiresome. Also, start the quality off on high, not medium!
What I will say is good is the animation. Phenomenal job, dude.
I was afraid the blurs and enlarged symbols on the zooms (wasn't using a vcam) might cause lag on high quality, and the difference on medium wasn't so bad, so I just went ahead and did that (and I also duplicated the enlarged symbols and deleted most of what isn't showing just in case).
The ending was too quick. He went through all of that for just that? I bit abrupt...
The graphics were bland and regular, and the whole pace was slow and unexciting. Add some more "pizazz to both your story and your graphics.
the graphics were fine the animation was just lacking because I only had 3 days to do this. I spent a total of 30 hours on it and this is what I could come up with. Had this been a full time project it would have met every improvement suggested :P
I suppose you've learned a valuable lesson...
If you say it's been stolen, people believe you.
Anyway, the flash itself was fine, a good chuckle. Well animated, too.
lol I like how it got like a million more views just because I made that up
The animation for the battle was fantastic and the audio was correctly placed.
The ending, although shocking, was somewhat dull. The sequel might be interesting, but if the only plot involves Pichachu killing himself, it could easily be dull also.
The fighting was superb. Work on the plot.
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