Bomber109's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ScissorMan: Episode 1]

Good!

That was pretty entertaining. Jokes were great. On the contrary, however, I have some criticisms.

1 - Audio needs to be...better. At some points, the background music is overpowering, and the vocals, although recorded pretty well overall, could be higher quality. However, the sound effects worked great, and the choice of background music was perfect.

2 - Lip syncing doesn't always match.

3 - Scene select?

Camjo-Z responds:

1 - I can agree with this. I've figured out how to adjust sound levels now, so it should be fixed in the second episode.

2 - That was just due to laziness. Tee-hee.

3 - Added as per your request!

[Link Misses His Target]

Meh.

The humor isn't really all that good and the looping is annoying. In addition, the end is a bit tiresome. Also, start the quality off on high, not medium!

What I will say is good is the animation. Phenomenal job, dude.

DannyP responds:

I was afraid the blurs and enlarged symbols on the zooms (wasn't using a vcam) might cause lag on high quality, and the difference on medium wasn't so bad, so I just went ahead and did that (and I also duplicated the enlarged symbols and deleted most of what isn't showing just in case).

[Recycled Mario]

Bleh...

The graphics were bland and regular, and the whole pace was slow and unexciting. Add some more "pizazz to both your story and your graphics.

hrechkaness responds:

the graphics were fine the animation was just lacking because I only had 3 days to do this. I spent a total of 30 hours on it and this is what I could come up with. Had this been a full time project it would have met every improvement suggested :P

[Whiny the pooh]

I suppose you've learned a valuable lesson...

If you say it's been stolen, people believe you.

Anyway, the flash itself was fine, a good chuckle. Well animated, too.

Emanhattan responds:

lol I like how it got like a million more views just because I made that up

[Is that.. Mario & Luigi?!]

Um, this is definitely not Mature.

There's no explicit text and the explicit audio is bleeped out. Adult themes is applicable, however.

Anyway, on to the real movie.

First of all, I liked it. Your graphics were nice, and animated nicely. The storyline was also funny. I just recommend making it longer, unless you seriously can't think of a way to lengthen this without making it dull.

DAGamesOfficial responds:

well yeah there is explict text, if it's beeped out, it's still there no matter what. plus you kind of get an idea of what the character is saying. it's nothing less than explict text, it is explict, no matter if its cencored or not.

anyway, thanks. I don't think I could have made it longer, it would drag on, and honestly, Im kind of lazy, so yeah I made one where I ALMOST didnt want to carry on xP

[Beans Beans]

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That was funny, but way too short. I recommend you lengthen it.

Blordow responds:

it was intended to be short

[dugu dugu part 1]

Woah.

I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.

Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.

The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.

newto responds:

tks alot for the comment and time spend in watching my clip. I will try to improve myself in the next clip .

[Super Mario 3 parodys 2]

Eh...

Three problems:
-Confusing animation.
-Bad skits.
-Various misspellings. (unless they were intentional)

MarioFlashMovies responds:

Okay, Responce:
- Animation: One of our first flashes
- Skits: One of our first flashes
- Misspelling: I'm bad in English.

[Squarepusher]

That was pretty cool.

Great since you're new to flash.

It would be awesome, however, if you had added a background and possibly made it a little longer (used a longer song).

theamoeba responds:

haha the actual song IS longer, i just made a loop.
but maybe one day i will make it longer

[Blockhead: Episode 10]

Great Animation, Storyline Getting Not Funny

It was good.

The graphics were great, but the Blockhead storylines are starting to lose their previous luster.

The-Swain responds:

I think this is the first actual "storyline" since episode 7. Every other episode's story was "Blockhead does stuff." :)