Bomber109's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[elemental brush fight]

Interesting.

That was fine. But there are a lot of improvements that can be done.

-Sound Effects
-Music Cuts Off (Is this a glitch?)
-Abrupt Ending

But besides that, it was fairly good. Nice graphics and animation.

[Is that.. Mario & Luigi?!]

Um, this is definitely not Mature.

There's no explicit text and the explicit audio is bleeped out. Adult themes is applicable, however.

Anyway, on to the real movie.

First of all, I liked it. Your graphics were nice, and animated nicely. The storyline was also funny. I just recommend making it longer, unless you seriously can't think of a way to lengthen this without making it dull.

DAGamesOfficial responds:

well yeah there is explict text, if it's beeped out, it's still there no matter what. plus you kind of get an idea of what the character is saying. it's nothing less than explict text, it is explict, no matter if its cencored or not.

anyway, thanks. I don't think I could have made it longer, it would drag on, and honestly, Im kind of lazy, so yeah I made one where I ALMOST didnt want to carry on xP

[The 1-up Pursuit]

Awesome.

You're definitely a much better animator than JonBro, comparing yours and his, so I'd have to say I liked yours better. I also enjoyed the humor you added in.

[a little animation <3]

Great job.

I thought it was very well drawn and animated, but too short. If you made this longer, it would be much better.

[Salty Swamp]

Great job.

I liked your use of Banjo-Kazooie music. Your animation was also fairly good.

So, the only thing that you could really improve on would be graphics. It's not that they were terrible, but they weren't super awesome.

[Beans Beans]

...

That was funny, but way too short. I recommend you lengthen it.

Blordow responds:

it was intended to be short

[dugu dugu part 1]

Woah.

I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.

Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.

The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.

newto responds:

tks alot for the comment and time spend in watching my clip. I will try to improve myself in the next clip .

[Shrek VS SpongeBob 2]

Needs improvement.

First of all, I recommend you get a better background. You know, something from a video game, not a grey cube and a red gradient.

Also, you need to fix your spriting. Try to keep them at the same level (Shrek was moving up and down as he walked) and rip the sprites without getting pieces of other animations.

And finally, I recommend you make it longer.