Score: 5

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submission: Retarded kirby Remasterd

date: December 4, 2008

I seriously recommend you work on your storyline. A lot.

Otherwise, it was fine. Animation was decent. And I recommend using Nightmare in Dreamland sprites instead if you want to.

Score: 10

"Great job."

submission: Inward Singing

date: December 4, 2008

That was hilarious and well animated.

However, there were a few poses that looked wrong.

Score: 8

"Great job."

submission: a little animation <3

date: December 1, 2008

I thought it was very well drawn and animated, but too short. If you made this longer, it would be much better.

Score: 10

"Great job."

submission: Salty Swamp

date: December 1, 2008

I liked your use of Banjo-Kazooie music. Your animation was also fairly good.

So, the only thing that you could really improve on would be graphics. It's not that they were terrible, but they weren't super awesome.

Score: 6

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submission: Beans Beans

date: December 1, 2008

That was funny, but way too short. I recommend you lengthen it.

Score: 10

"ROFL."

submission: Food We Eat

date: November 30, 2008

I'm not sure what would be better.

A crappy art style with this humor, or a well animated art style with this humor.

Score: 9

"Woah."

submission: dugu dugu part 1

date: November 30, 2008

I'm not even going to begin to say how incredible that was for a first flash.

Anyway, well done. Nicely animated, and the ending was hilarious.

The only way you could make it better would be to sharpen your graphics.

Score: 7

"I'm going to overlook the stolen concept"

submission: /\ OutSide The Box /\

date: November 30, 2008

Anyway, this is great, but I recommend you polish the graphics. It was somewhat hard to tell if you were losing health, too.

Score: 4

"Needs improvement."

submission: Shrek VS SpongeBob 2

date: November 30, 2008

First of all, I recommend you get a better background. You know, something from a video game, not a grey cube and a red gradient.

Also, you need to fix your spriting. Try to keep them at the same level (Shrek was moving up and down as he walked) and rip the sprites without getting pieces of other animations.

And finally, I recommend you make it longer.

Score: 8

"LOL, nice."

submission: Nature Outing

date: November 29, 2008

That was pretty good. Funny, and animated quite well. HOWEVER:

I recommend making it longer. I also recommend making the eyelids and a few of the mouth frames look less odd (it was well lip synced though).